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Untitled Emotion

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Untitled Emotion

A shock wave rolls over my skin,
Lightning arcs through my veins,

I feel a flame in my eye,
Turning everything into a haze,

Heart pulsing,
To end someone else's beat,

Fight to contain,
What I should let free,

Feel the cringing muscles,
The quick spasms,

Brain quickly shutting it down,
Fighting to maintain control,

Trying to keep them down,
When all I wish is that I could unleash them instead…
dont we all just get the urge to punch things sometimes?

any comments, tips, critiques, ect. appreciated

have a good one ;)
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Darksknight's avatar
Very well done. Beautiful.